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maybe i by =Ameas-Qua:iconAmeas-Qua:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Mature Romance > Spoken Word


and maybe I,
would break the lines from this box,
and present you I, in a standing ovation.
©2006-2009 =Ameas-Qua
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Author's Comments

the word of the evening, ladies and gentlemen is; maybe.

if i was a lesser man, maybe i would already have broken you
down.
if i was though less of,
maybe
you
would have broken me.

maybe i would sacrifice all my creativity for another hit.
and maybe you would have been
impressed
with that.

maybe ill never tell you what those stars shine for,
and maybe
youll figuire it out through my words.

maybe i, would care more for love,
if maybe you never asked.

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~kamijisatsu Jul 30, 2006, 4:43:11 AM
I love you and this poem.
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~prettyinpain Jul 30, 2006, 12:29:47 PM
absolutely beautiful.

--
I love my baby!
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=Ameas-Qua Jul 30, 2006, 8:50:39 PM
thanks doll

--
Ameas Qua.
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=Ameas-Qua Jul 30, 2006, 8:50:56 PM
aww yay!
love.

--
Ameas Qua.
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~Purpl3Sky Aug 3, 2006, 5:53:54 PM
all the maybe's in it really made this great.

--
acid goes to your head;

ecstasy goes to your heart

Peace&Love
:kitty: :peace: :heart:
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=Ameas-Qua Aug 3, 2006, 8:42:55 PM
thank you so much.
:)

--
Ameas Qua.
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