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The Elegance Of Autumn by =Ameas-Qua:iconAmeas-Qua:



Oh Autumn,
with your cautiously elegant pallet.

While they named you for the
way you fall,
and the storm of leaves from your trees.

I find you to be,
more of a floating
In this pile of reds oranges and cremes.
©2008-2009 =Ameas-Qua
:iconameas-qua:

Author's Comments

**-*EDIT*-**
Thanks to =wildmonky for his suggestion. the italicized text has been altered to make a correct sentence.



Written about my love for this season,
and the change as it happens.

:)

pay attention to the italicized words. ;)

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:iconwildmonky:
:hump:

--
All sapient beings evade what evolution shaped us for. --Larry Niven
:iconameas-qua:
yeah, enjoy that.
;)

--
Ameas Qua.
:iconmoonbeameuly:
Oooh, I like the sentence! It's like a poem within it's own right, and the idea is really cool.

Oh, and also : 'cautiously elegant pallet' = :heart:

=]

Not very imaginative today, I'm sure there's way more I could say about it!

--
Be An Impact.

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