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On that Infinite feeling II by =Ameas-Qua:iconAmeas-Qua:



She said,
"It's the greatest thing you'll ever know"
as we, dipped our fingers in that forbidden fruit.
It was so beautiful,
and it couldn't have been the drug.
It just,
Couldn't
have been the drug.

She said,
"time doesn't float like angels here,
the wind carries us and the soft rocking of everything
keeps us in tune."
I could understand her thoughts
as her words, gently melted into me.

As she spoke of destiny and embalming
The sky flared up, and the earth took flight,
as i inhaled the last of the eternal night sky.

I said,
"The only constant we have,
is the love we make."

We never,
questioned our words that night,
because we understood everything.

She kissed me,
with a forbidden open minded grace
that left me limp, weak and torn.
I watched the beauty fade from everything
and realized nothing dies.
©2006-2009 =Ameas-Qua
:iconameas-qua:

Author's Comments

Part II
I dont really want to explain this one, itll take the fun out of it.
but for clarification. The girl, i had never met, we ran into each other one night.



on the infinite feeling things give you.

inspired by oen fo recently favourite books. (wow grammar)
The Perks Of Being A Wallflower

this is the part it kinda relates to

Anyway, Patrick started driving really fast, and just before we got to the tunnel, Sam stood up, and the wind turned her dress into ocean waves. When we hit the tunnel, all the sound got scooped up into a vaccuum, and it was replaced by a song on the tape player. A beautiful song called "Landslide." When we got out of the tunnel, Sam screamed this really fun scream, and there it was. Downtown. Lights on buildings and everything that makes you wonder. Sam sat down and started laughing. Patrick started laughing. I started laughing.

And in that moment, I swear we were infinite.


ever felt infinite? i mean have you ever really sat down, thought about it and said
"i am to happy to not live forever."?
yea.. feeling inifinite is good..but it can be bad, sometimes i feel infinite when im depressed.

the poems one of many i plan to do now, on the little moments that make you feel infinite.

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:iconwildmonky:
i love the tone.

it couldn't be the drug,
no not the drug.

--
Hey, party in my eye socket and everyone's invited!...

Sometimes I shouldn't say words. --Xander Harris
:iconameas-qua:
thanks u saying i should change it tothat or?

--
Ameas Qua.
:iconwildmonky:
lol no. i was just too lazy to cut and past OR scroll up. Don't change anything.

--
Hey, party in my eye socket and everyone's invited!...

Sometimes I shouldn't say words. --Xander Harris
:iconameas-qua:
hahaha.
thanks man.

--
Ameas Qua.
:iconflesh-box:
Zing. Love this. It captures a great moment.

--
Expect the worst, accept the worst, demand the worst.
:iconameas-qua:
thanks man.

--
Ameas Qua.
:icondancing-naked:
The Perks Of Being A Wallflower ... is ... a thing of wonder a lot like you

This poem ... reminds me of kissing strangers ( a hobbie of mine)

You ... amaze me more then I want you to

My comments - shit-

Your work ... makes me want to keep pushing my self I feel like the sin eater
:iconstatic-sidhe:
This conjures a really beautiful moment in my head; something I'd love to experience.

Have you ever considered writing a novel? Or just a piece of longer prose? Your writing to me feels like lots of little pieces, beautiful on their own but if they all came together it'd be like...a little linguistic orgasm.

I dunno, I'm tired lol. Just a thought. Ignore if you like.
:icondoors0fprception:
i love this, great work

--
<3Trisha
cardiecardinal@hotmail.com

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