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Hues Of Lifted Despair. by =Ameas-Qua:iconAmeas-Qua:



Small moments of tiring descretion,
harmonies of historic despair,
seem to linger between the glass.

Behind the viel of my own
immoral self pity,
the clouds seem to fade behind the sun,
if only for a moment.

many fine moments,
written in the gazes of longing,
broken sonnets lingering in the stale air.

Conversations of nothing,
dancing around the hope of everything,
one moment of clarity amidst the fog's viel.
©2005-2009 =Ameas-Qua
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Author's Comments

For her,
thought of on a train, written on a bus reciept,
put onto my computer, yesterday.

It's hard to write/create when i'm happy.
Seems all my talents comes out of my despair and or disguist with the world.

I have nothing to be sad about lately,
no reason to complain.

i find myself slightly unmotivated.

I saw a cat playing with a bush today, it made me smile.

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:iconkamijisatsu:
Your words always make me cry, but I love it.

:cuddle:
:iconmullybinks:
'one moment of clarity amidst the fog's viel' :omfg:
That is one fantastic line!!! You write very well..

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:heart: Divya
:iconameas-qua:
your an angel
:hug:

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Ameas Qua.
:iconmullybinks:
U are! A talented one at that :glomp:

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:heart: Divya
:iconkawill:
Just wanted to comment on your description. I think many have the same "problem", that art and such often comes out of boredom or depression. It's so for me often anyway. And for others I know aswell. Maybe it's because it's an escape of reality, and when things are fine you don't have to escape.

Good poem, describes with different words, words I myself like, a situation... I think of it as lost love. But I don't know the whole story of "her", only you do.

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karlwilliam.se
:iconameas-qua:
"her" is a crazy story,
Kinda.. weird having to read this peice again. heh

thanks for all the comments, ive been so busy lately i ahvent had time to reply but i appreciate them.

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Ameas Qua.
:iconkawill:
Well, it's a great poem. The share the time issue with ya anyways ;)

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karlwilliam.se
:iconkawill:
Edit: I share the tim...*

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karlwilliam.se
:iconskankcore:
do you mean desecration or discretion?

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