When misery falls at you like a snowstorm,
in gentle lapses of frozen tears.
You gaze lightly at the sky for,
just a moments resolve.
All the while concentrating on yourself
you a subtle whispering creature
Exhale
and separate yourself from the rest of the page.
While the story trails on,
in drunken stanzas and
shoe-print
dedications.
You blink,
only to catch the last of that
elusive
slice of meteor
Stab at the atmosphere like a match on glass.
until she
quietly
crawls
away
Like you had never seen her shine.
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something i wrote,
after sitting on my patio, smoking. I caught a shooting star, it lasted a good 3 seconds. The interest in using space and planetary things as metaphors and expressive tools... I am figuring is mostly derived from =wildmonky and I having strange conVERSAtions. or his writing.  Comments
 This is neat, the structure of the last stanza is very effective.
 I can't find what versa is! Damn you and your winning.
-- All sapient beings evade what evolution shaped us for. --Larry Niven HAH!
I am winner  lol. thanks man. -- Ameas Qua. i thought so as well, cheers.
-- Ameas Qua.  I have missed your writing immensely. You have such a wondrous way of explaining things.
 -- We're all pawns, my dear.  GO HERE ----> [link] thank you much dear
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