Come to me, While I whisper my longing for you, into shades of gold and lavender. Take my hand, as i point out a shattering diamond, in the swelling night sea. Close your eyes, as we slide from gravity's hold and wrap ourselves in each others arms. Dance with me, on the dust of this twinkle, as fate soars to new heights. Upon waking, Remember the feeling of dancing, with our feet on ruined stars. |
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on a whim, in a breeze. Comments
 This is honestly one of the best poems I have come across recently.
 I love the rhythm, the symbols chosen, and the final. -- My jewellery - [link] Wow,
 thank you for your kind words. It means alot. -- Ameas Qua.  Whims and breezes are wonderful things. So is this. So is you.
thank you
-- Ameas Qua.  That was beautiful...
sorry I can't give you a better critique than that but, I think I'm gonna go read more. ^_^ -- “Have you ever tried to find a bathroom in a pyramid?” “It’s like… some kind of inverse ninja law. A horde of elite ninjas are useless against a lone opponent but one dead, rotting, and retarded ninja can perform occasional miracles.” thank you
no that was a fine critique -- Ameas Qua.  This is so beautiful, very touching. The imagery is gorgeous.
thank you much for the comment and favourite
 -- Ameas Qua. You are very welcome, I like your writing very much.
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