

Simply putSimply put, The greatest moments of sweeping virility, are left entangled by a Bogart sense of charm. She left you breathless and panting, in the same moment, when those pale emerald eyes like unfurling rose petals met you and wandered gently into your dreams. Words, motions and temptations all but confuse the senses, and the advancement of your convincing falls short to the patter of her feet from a distance, rushing into your arms. You always were a charmer, and your charms are far beyond wasted on her, but all the clever lines in all the gin joints in all the world couldn't convince her of her own beauty. &nbsSimply put


Retribution Of A Stolen GlowThere she was, as all the grandest of stories begin. Supple and wanting for nothing, enclosed in her own appreciation of her world.Retribution Of A Stolen Glow
Her shimmering danced across the midnight mists of the lake, Connecting the stars like dots, into the happiest ideas in her mind.
Poetry with no voice, trailed behind her until resting, it lingered on the lips of roses.
When the roaring came,
It drove the mists from the lake, And set fire to the forest behind it.
It crushed the valleys with its feet made of the hardest wood she had ever seen, and screamed into the still air, awakening th
-dae
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The desire for solitude comes with a loneliness only an artist could understand. - Dae.
aloha.
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writers bleed words...
freewill
over
fate...
...which do you choose (pick one)
I liked your piece though, and felt that you'd probably be okay with the crit; no-one seems to comment with any real feeling anymore, and every now and then I feel compelled to pull myself out of the mire and get involved
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[exeunt]
So I'm going out tonight to blow bubbles. hoping they reach you before they pop, and you somehow know its me, missing you. and our friendship
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~*~Sit and waste away with me awhile~*~
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All sapient beings evade what evolution shaped [them] for. --Larry Niven
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We're all pawns, my dear.
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